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this was just what spilled out of my head onto the paper one day. I go back and read it and it makes sense to me.
©2005-2009 ~crustin
:iconcrustin:

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are you really as good
as i have percieved
in a mind that is generally
scattered and incoherant
drooling and making noises
like a wookie on acid
clenched fist and rolling eyes
shaking uncontrollably and
whining to nothing
fading and falling into
my own pool and
trusting that fate will find me
and all of the bleeding and
unaltered silence will
still be unalterable
in a time where noise is music
with cracks of whips
and hammer of nails
and flight is possible
for natural people
with supernatural powers

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:iconkrazykel:
lol i think youve got the discription and the writing the wrong way round dear


well written though :P

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:iconxandrique:
haha, yeah, you need to fix that... on your own work there's a button underneath the image that says "edit" and you can change that around.


I can see a lot of imagery the way I would write it in this poem... it's better than your old lyrics that I have read.
:iconcrustin:
yah i screwed up what can i say?

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